Hello Eggy, nice job on the song. It has the feeling of that journey home. Lyrics are well written and you've got the voice. Try to give your voice abit more punch (if you know what I mean) Like, sing abit stronger, your voice holds the notes very well. I can hear abit of keyboard and harmonica in this song and a second vocal with harmony. Keep up the great work Eggy! Your song is in my favorites......JGV

Simple and effective - needs remixing like the fish man has suggested, and yes to the vocal harmonies as per Marino's comment.  Actually, I hear strings in this too - very subtle, but there all the same.
Nice