Schubbi_Guitar/Composition
Flyer_Lyrics/Vocals


I'am re-adding a few songs since the download policy has changed. This is one of them

"Wayne, Let Them Bleed "

To hear your voice one last time
to feel your warmth before I go
to fight another mans war
for questions that cant be answerd
is this the way its suppose to be
politicians that take you away from me
who dont know a verse in the bible
they act like they care when we are six
feet below
damn this war damn the demon
who
bring's it

Been
writing Mother's dead son letters
a flag
for a son they'll live without
memories of friends in the twighlight
holding on with every tear stained breath
there is a god
baby please pray for us
we killed innocent men and children
we denied we existed
is this the way its suppose to be
is this the way its suppose to be



Politicians have
dinner with their families while we die to
keep them free
they crucify us for their inefficiency
they crucified us
for their inefficient deeds
my blood belongs to me
God Damn the war
God damn the demon
who
dropped his seed
God damn them to hell let him bleed
let him bleed
God damn them all right to hell let them
be the ones who bleed
in their killing spree


Memories of friends in the twighlight

Holding on with every breath of life

Crucified for inefficient deeds

Crucifed for inefficiency

My blood belongs to me

Let them be the ones who bleed

In a killing spree


Just let them
let them Bleed Wayne
they owe it to all of us
you and me


Music By Schubbi
Lyrics By Flyer

a brilliant song, and credit to you for tackling such a deep, emotive subject. The music and lyrics are equally fantastic. imo, there are just a couple of issues with the vox. In some places (when the distorted guitar comes in especially), i think the vocals could come up in the mix. I like that backing singing an octave higher, but i think that could also be louder, aswell as to sing more cohesivley with the main vocal track if ya know what i mean.

Great collab guys!

Ian

Thanks Ian...Your right about the vox...I was afraid that I would take away from Schubbi's Guitar. That's the reason I didnt kick the Vox up.. I may have made a mistake ..thanks for the comment, Ian...

Flyer

Very strong emotive song here Flyer.

Actually would have liked to here your vox better in the mix, I just think you need to cut down the reveb in both the music and the vox, and it would cut through much better pluse give it more bottom, I would try cutting the reverb forst before messing with the EQ.

Great collab

Cheers

Denis

Denis... Thanks for that advice...I have done just that on some other work that I have the same problem with. The vox being a bit to low. I pulled back on some of the reverb on the EQ...seems to have done the job...thanks buddy....Thanks for the comment and for listening, also

Flyer