I want to thank everyone for the very constructive critiques to the 1st version of this song. I made the suggested and necessary changes. I'm not going to delete the 1 st version for the simple fact that I don't want to delete the comments that were made.

This is a Hank Williams Jr song...

Flyer

Hey man, this is definatly better. Like the subtle flanging effect on the guitar, and the harmonies are real nice. the vocals don't sound too cluttered either.

Very nice listen

Ian

hey, i like it this way!  I agree about the light flanger.  Good work

Hey, I want to get my tambourine out and sit by the camp fire,  jam all night long and chill big time.

Lovely feel here Flyer.

Way to go.

Denis

cheers mate! really good easy listening song. i most like your back vocal.

all the best!

Thanks everyone..the comments are very much appreciated...

pndc...

Welcome to Bandamp...you will find out that this is a great site for Musician's...The Community is full of nice people also. Many are willing to help out a fellow amper...If there is anything i can help you with just say the word

Flyer

hate to burst the bubble
but this is is not as good as it could be.............sorry.
sounds v lazy 2 me
work on the skills u have gained

its got no drive

fish

tellin as i hear it

sorry

Dont worry Fish  ..Its all good...I have a bubble making machine...I got it at a Garden Party  I went to..They all new my name ..very strange ..lol...

BTW, what do you mean by it being lazy?  (its a laid back, mellow Country song) Just curious as it might help me to understand what you mean and could be of future help in any work I do...


Thanks for the omment

( If you think this one is bad then dont listen to the 1st  version  lol)

Flyer

I kind of see what Swordie is saying here, but at the same time, knowing the song as I do, I think this really fits the mood of the song... The song is a lazy song... it's a drunk off your a$$ and playin all night in a smoke filled bar, and your woman dun left ya song... so, it does fit this mood....  as a matter of fact, I downed 2 5ths of Jack while listening to this track, because it's so dang depressing...  sheesh....  I feel so lonely...  Dang you Flyer... 

           

                JimK

LOL  JIM    Thanks for listening and the comment  bro

Flyer