My friend David Newby has added synth and percussion to this

Hope you like.

Any comments would be appreciated.

Cheers

Denis

hey its good i like but the synth isnt really my style the guitar is great!!!!
around the 0:23 mark there is a synth roll that dosnt really seem very smooth
the procussion is nice!! right before they come on at 0:12 i would have hit the hi hat twice or so to bring in the drums but that is just my style!!! its very good keep up the work

Synths definatley add an extra dimension to the song - keep things interesting where there would otherwise be vocals.  Very 80's in places. 
Im still lookin out for someone to bring out the aerosmith rock-ballad-chorus version of this.  Although I have no electric with me at the minute, might have a play around this weekend on my accoustic to get a feel of what it might sound like.

An interesting adaptation to an already great piece all told.

Kobeshi

Reminicent of Pink Floyd a bit, which is a good thing.  Instruments are very good.  Synth effects are interesting, but the tune stands on its own very well.  Waiting for it to kick into another rythym, but stuck to the same.  I think you can add more to the composition and it will really improve.

This the second review I've seen from you.

You are a good critque.

This was really a Jam, I liked the sound from the keys, but Yeah, your right it would be great
for me to work on building up the song.

Cheers

Denis