#1July 26th, 2007 · 02:06 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
46 posts
United Kingdom
Shearline
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A little song I just wrote, I have a bit of a cold.  A slower number.

Our band should be gigging pretty soon! It's all exciting.

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#2July 26th, 2007 · 03:20 PM
47 threads / 17 songs
1,548 posts
Germany
beautiful guitar playing
except these f....king F chords, uh?
beautiful voice, love the doo doo, very nice song
good luck to you and your band
#3July 26th, 2007 · 05:02 PM
80 threads / 61 songs
953 posts
United Kingdom
Sort of Oasis feel to it. Nice Vox.

I like the intro, the guitar after that is nice, but I would try playing it a little softer so that it matches you figerpicking.

Nice song, look forward to hearing more of you and the band.

Good luck.

Denis
#4July 26th, 2007 · 05:57 PM
132 threads / 34 songs
2,362 posts
Netherlands
Cool ! you have two songs on your 'music' page but it says 3 next to your avatar.
Must be that your so good it counts some of your songs as 2! lol

Well done!
That was a VERY nice song. I have no other comment really. Just loved it, well sung, love the husky 'I've partied all night and I'm a killer' voice! lol
The guitars beautiful ,
Want to post the lyrics?

Really like the end and the DooDoos, Excellent!
#5July 26th, 2007 · 07:20 PM
7 threads / 6 songs
34 posts
South Africa
Very good vocals.  Excellent use of effects... just the right amound of reverb and compression.

It sounds like you need a slightly better mic on the guitar.  The one you're using is picking up lots of noise.

My big criticism is this:  I keep expecting it to go somewhere, and it doesn't.  Where's the chorus?  For that reason, I wouldn't classify this as a hit.  But it would certainly find a respectable place on an album.
#6July 27th, 2007 · 07:14 AM
140 threads / 78 songs
1,552 posts
United States
Doo Doo
THis song is cool, doo doo....   It makes me smile doo doo....


    I know I'm gonna sing it all day,

              Doo doo
              doo doo....

 
   Pretty slick.. I agree the guitar should be played a touch softer, and not sure how you recorded it, but I don't think it was the mic, as much as the placement, and the processing of the track after recording that keeps the guitar sounding so bad(it isn't THAT bad though,)  but all in all, Me like...

                JimK
#7July 27th, 2007 · 11:29 AM
11 threads / 7 songs
90 posts
United States
Wow, the guitar sounds great.
I like the vocals, very nice sound. I like the lyrics as well, they're very catchy. Great job
#8July 27th, 2007 · 11:39 AM
32 threads / 9 songs
1,753 posts
United States
Nice recording and well made song.Great voice and melody,Maybe a little more presence and less highs on the mix of the vox to warm it up a bit!! But is still awesome non the less
#9July 28th, 2007 · 08:33 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
51 posts
United States
The real deal
Dude, you are the real deal.  great song! great vocals, great chords and melody.  Keep up the great work.
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