#1May 27th, 2007 · 10:01 AM
29 threads / 23 songs
162 posts
Ireland
Doubtless
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Some peaking as per usual, but it's striking while the iron is hot, just came out and had to get it down as quick as possible, with some guide harmonies.  Next week, finally a decent mic and a USB preamp.  Sweet.

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#2May 27th, 2007 · 10:40 AM
35 threads / 17 songs
574 posts
United States
Yes It Does..
it does have potential.. you are like I am
son, when I get one in my head like that
I must get the main melody idea and any
accompaniment recorded down before
I loose everything except the hook...
I'll give it this ( in his best George Harrison
cockney brogue ) "it needs rehearsal.. blue
meanies??"  end quote...  yea just polish it
up,  get a little confidence behind ya when
you cut the vocals next time.. will come from
some intense practice..  but overall the song is
kewl.. and the lyric is very meaningful!!! good
work and good composition dude!!! keep it up!


blessings,

Blueyes
#3May 27th, 2007 · 11:12 AM
38 threads / 13 songs
1,800 posts
United States
Very nice indeed.You defenetly have some good writting skills.Very well sang too.Love the harmony hiss and all.Can wait till you have your Mic and USB so we can really hear this in its best.
#4May 27th, 2007 · 11:23 AM
29 threads / 23 songs
162 posts
Ireland
re: Yes It Does..
Blueyes wrote…
it does have potential.. you are like I am
son, when I get one in my head like that
I must get the main melody idea and any
accompaniment recorded down before
I loose everything except the hook...
I'll give it this ( in his best George Harrison
cockney brogue ) "it needs rehearsal.. blue
meanies??"  end quote...  yea just polish it
up,  get a little confidence behind ya when
you cut the vocals next time.. will come from
some intense practice..  but overall the song is
kewl.. and the lyric is very meaningful!!! good
work and good composition dude!!! keep it up!


blessings,

Blueyes

Cheers Dan, I'd hardly touched the guitar in 2 months, let alone written a song and this one just popped out.  Still embryonic at the moment, I've done another version in the last half hour with drums and 142 bpm with a bridge and a breakdown, but the simplicity suits it better.
#5May 27th, 2007 · 11:24 AM
29 threads / 23 songs
162 posts
Ireland
Marino wrote…
Very nice indeed.You defenetly have some good writting skills.Very well sang too.Love the harmony hiss and all.Can wait till you have your Mic and USB so we can really hear this in its best.

You do realise I'm your 666th post?  Freaky

Thanks for the compliment man, can't wait to get a nice warm, well recorded version of this down.
#6May 27th, 2007 · 01:47 PM
89 threads / 66 songs
976 posts
United Kingdom
There's always a special magic in a song that's fresh in creation, good job you got it down.

It's already a lovely composition, the polished version I'm sure will be even better.

Denis
#7May 27th, 2007 · 02:54 PM
29 threads / 23 songs
162 posts
Ireland
Denis wrote…
There's always a special magic in a song that's fresh in creation, good job you got it down.

It's already a lovely composition, the polished version I'm sure will be even better.

Denis

Cheers Denis, gotta keep the magic warm
#8May 28th, 2007 · 04:18 PM
35 threads / 17 songs
574 posts
United States
simplicity
always turns out best.. to busy and
to muddy often hides the writers
true emotion and meanings..


bluey
#9May 28th, 2007 · 08:25 PM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
Good vocals mate! great song as well.
Maybe what needs a bit of work are the guitars
Cheers
Geo
#10May 29th, 2007 · 11:41 AM
29 threads / 23 songs
162 posts
Ireland
Cheers Geo, I think this one could work really well with the full band, get it building up into an epic finale, crashing guitars...
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