Just a tune I wrote about a lil' trip a friend told me about. Hope you all like it!

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Sorry, the songs I post on here are of pre-production qaulity that we used to write with. Finished copys will be released on an albumn at a later time. Hope you enjoy these rough, unfinished samples of our music!

Jeff R.
6fretsunder

Great voice and song.In my opinion you should minimize the solos to were your not singing.I feel like your taking away from your voice and melody.I would also construct something more melodic for a solo and then from there build some more elaborate stuff.Anyway you mentioned this being a rough so hopefully will get to hear some of the production stuff.Really cool song and great voice!Gets vote

good feel to this one.. wish I could hear the
post production version already.. something
tells me by the hint of the other guitar parts,
this is a force to be reckoned with!!


blessings,

Blueyes - Danny

awesome guitar work!
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My stuff on here is pre production too but I love yours that way.
again AWESOME guitar work!
  
WIll P

GREAT SONG! Lovely guitar work.

I love the organic texture of this song. I listened again and again.

Yeah, I agree this is a great song. The whole package has a lot of promise. Great theme, great vocals, Needs a better recording (this sounds like an informal jam, taped with a boom box or something) The guitar leads need to be much more restrained (let him play only when you're not singing). The song and the vocals are SO GOOD, I really want to hear them clearly. Are the vocals doubled or chorused? ...sounds like it....

Really nice song, excellent vocal, the effect is a bit Plantish! cool!
Agree with battlecat about the lead guitar, it should give the vocal more space (or play something else!!)
Yes GOOD stuff!

'Vision comes to those that see you!'

very good. I cant give any advice that hasnt already been given. be sure to put post production on here to.

btw, cool name (6 frets under)

Ian

great voice man. great skills. love it.
much potential
would love to hear this song well arranged and recorded in a pro studio.
(I can hear a full version in my ears)

can't wait for the finished version!
Thanks for that

..and the guitars... wow.. nice songwriting!
as said: reduce the solo to the parts you're not singing
and then try to figure out some more melodic solo stuff
(not just running around on the patterns, eventhough it
sounds great this way, too)....
you have an awsome voice.. i'm jealous..

Thank You to all of you for the compliments!

Glad to hear someone likes it...


Jeff
6fretsunder

PS...

 the vocals were written and recorded over a finished mixdown of the instrumental version to see if we liked the lyrics and vocals. We will re-record this song in the studio from scratch very soon.