Hey there! This is a new song of me, it has not been finished yet, but I post it here to let some people hear it . And of course also for the people here . Posts are welcome

Greetz

RazoR

wow listening to as i type, this is pritty good, i like you voice alot ver chil and mellow, but theres a bit of distortion in a couple parts, i cant wait to hear the finished version, better get cracking kid!

Beautiful! I really love it!
Just need some work in the mixing, but I love your voice, the melody and the arrangements.
I suggest to keep the drums, since they enter, to the end; don't cut them.
But, again, great great work!

         > Iszil

Nice lyrics..good vocals..nice flow( listening as I type)Good Hamonizing..what do you plan on doing to the song ? you said its not complete..I like it as it is to be honest...I really like hearing you sing you have a natural voice...and I like you style of music....good effort here Razor

Flyer

a beautiful song,there's nothing more to say about it

Thanx man . I'll go take a look (hear) at your songs

RazoR

well ths was  a touhin song as i feel,

he's got a very good voice and everything is very well done by him.....
i'm not much of a jugde but hey ths man rockss........yeahhhhhhh.......

God you make me want to come over there and give you a big hug.

That was hart wrenching

You've got the music
You've got the lyric
You've got the look
You've got the voice
Get your English pronunciation right and you could take your work any where if you ask me.

I could even teach you, I'm not Dutch I only live here and I do give English lessons some times.

Otherwise I agree completely with Schubbi.

Doei

Thanx a lot for all the great comments !.

To kings, yeah I need to get my pronuciation right, so if you have tips for me, they are very welcome!

Thanks again.

Greetz

RazoR

beautiful beautiful!!!!!

lovin the bridge, too!!

are those flutes?

Yes those are flutes . Well not real ones, played by keyboard.. but they are supposed to sound real.. and i guess that worked out .

And thanks!

greetz

RazoR