Hey there
i really like you're songs,
but youre accent is a bit...diffrent
But I really like the rest.

This tune has a little more nastiness to it versus the first song i listened to..."So Beautiful".  I like the "roar" vox to transition into the guitar riff.  Now this is what I'm talking about.  one hint...I would rather hear accoustic drums on the song.  I think it would make the guitar/vox jump out a little more in the track.  You also need a better ending to round it out.