Hey there .

It was quite a while since i posted some songs, It's because I am a bit busy with work & other things now, so I though I'd post this song in the meantime.. the idea is like 6 months old..

It's more rock / metal like.. and it has to be shaped up more but well.. hope you guys like the idea.

Hey

I love the RAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH before the distortion guitar comes in at 58 seconds. SCARY!!!!

As you say it's a bit rough round the edges but, although not my type of stuff, I like it.

PRG

Very good construction,love the way it builds,you know its coming and you anticipate it and then rrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.Yes! Love the palm muted guitar riff.My only critique would be sing this like its the last song your ever going to sing and you want the whole world to stop what they're doing and listen.Like with some pent up aggression but still mellow you know? Anyway this will be a pretty decent tune after its been polished up.

well placed instruments. the guitar seems to be a little too loud imo. the mic is hissing maybe the pre amp gain is too much.

but it is a cool song

nice combination of instruments, i like the change at 2:30, and when the drums return is great too, maybe drumpattern could get doubled in the end to bring it to a higher level..

i agree with what basketcase said about the singin

but i like the idea!

kindof a rough production,

but the build up is really powerful, ...

As for the singing, it reminds me of Covenant (the electro band - not the metal band), I think it's a style in itself, to sing like this. I can appreciate it, because it sounds really sincere, "real". It just something one would expect. I would put more modulation effects to it.

Anyway, more of this metal please... It suits you nicely...

Busy with work - I know that feeling!!!

I like the song.  As PX says, it builds up really powerfully.
The vocals need a little work; not sure exactly, but they sound a little as if you're holding back a fair bit.  There are a few "dodgy" bits in there too, where you're singing fairly out of tune - but it's not too bad.
I like the construction
I like the music
I like the vocal melody (the above notwithstanding)

This is a decent track
Good stuff

ooh cool.

the raaaaahhh.... yep.

great guitars after the rahhh as well. great texture.

nice thumping drums.

cool song. vox off key a bit in spots. but not bad.

got my vote.

Yeah good stuff! I like the gloomy feel, not bad lyrics as well...right track definitely.
 I think it's missiing a chorus or something....maybe above the overdrive guitar. might be a good spot to insert a chorus line.
Nevermind the dodgy recording, the tune is what it counts.

Nice build up to the RAAAAAAAAAA and guitar..nice blend  and it gives the song another direction ...love that.....a lil rough..maybe so...but this is good..I like your style on the piano...nice....

Flyer

you've gotta love that guitar. Rockin'.

whoaa....



nice buildup!

this song is rockin! lurve the piano as well!!!!

It has an awesome intro. could have some more guitar and drums.

I think, nee feel this to be an excellent song
Your such a talented and ambitious composer.

I heard and downloaded it a while ago, I liked it so much I even recorded a simple vocal chorus for the guitar break, It was some time later that I notice what GEO had said;

" I think it's missiing a chorus or something....maybe above the overdrive guitar. might be a good spot to insert a chorus line. "

Well I liked it so much then, I forgot to tell you how much I did like it.

Well I do, so there!

wooooooooooo........ths man rocks,

will some1 tell me wht the hell he smokes i need tht kinda stuff ....lolzzz
yo ray man ur too good honestly