Brief instrumental, more to get a feel for a progression that's been worming around my head all week.

©2006

a really good one. Built up is very good. Waiting for a whole thing.

me to, potential here if you keep working at it.

yeah liked the idea...
esp the ending ...
develop it..

nice idea, I like the guitar sounds you're getting - and the drums.

all a bit overpowered though, but good yeah

so keep working on it, it sounds promising...

guitar is awesome

I think the drums are a bit loud in the mix, in the beginning.
The progression is nice, but I feel you need something more notorious to make it instrumental; something to replace voice... if you know what I mean.
But this is a nice project starting.

         > Iszil

Good base , be carefull in your recording , the level is to high and sometime the sound is saturated... like the disto in the guitar ,but not in the mixing

Sounds good so far.  Please post next phase of song.

This is nice.... I disagree with what Isz said, I think it is pretty good for an instrumental..

   I also must disagree with Nemo6 a little, I think the levels aren't that bad... I think all the way around you have a nice albeit too short piece here... please consider redoing this and making it longer.... I will rate this one because you put it in the Battle, and I believe you meant to... but I wish you would re-consider and make it longer first.. 
 
             JimK

Dude, I'd forgotten completely about this instrumental and the more I listen to it again, I think it has to be developed a lot more.  It sounds like the music from a car ad as it stands now, which may not be an entirely good thing. 

Maybe I'll just throw it out there, if anyone wants to try vocals on it...?

very nice sound, a bit loud. jack

I think you can tell it was mixed in headphones, seems to be louder afterwards
Thanks a lot Jack, positive feedback makes my day

I listen to it again a year later....and it sounds like a feckin' car ad.  Maybe that's what it's meant to be.

Nice progression indeed!!!A bit short an unfinished.Do we get to hear a new version now that your set up with new gear???(LOL)