The balance of the piano to your vocals are nicely done.  I can really feel the passion you are putting into this song.  Good job!

I really love the molody line and keys in this song, it could go into a rock thing but I like it the way it is. The song idea and the piano playing get a high vote from me> I like the vocals but I think you could do a better job. I really like the sound of your voice don't be afraid to let it out more (change the vocal melody for more dynamic reactions and climax).
Whitney Houston was great at this. just my op though good job I'm down loading this

hey ray.......really nice song, a true song......ofcourse emotional ...

and my man ur the next big thing thts wht i think