not many lullabys on the amp
please leave a crit and vote

thanks
splash the fish

Wow Swordfish,

Different!
It's a sweet song though - recording, playing all good.
Not sure about the overly electronic sounding keys - they work, but.......

It's nice, in a lullaby-ish way; I guess that was the intention
Still, have to say it's a bit on the cheesy side

Have to have a snooze now

nice..nice...nice......good work Sword...nice harmonies..and I like the music ...Yeah...

GOOD WORK

Ralph

I like it, those vocals remind me slightly of Pink Floyed. Suits it.
yes, there is the problem of the cheese though.....but hey. I embrace chese
Good track, do you want a rating?

sweet and cute... different...

a typical electronic bass drum with orchestration... nice contrast... filtered type vocals... nicely sung... sensitive...

luvly..

This is a very nice little lullably....can't....keep my...eyes...op-zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

ah yes.

very nice.. mm.. sleepy

ahhh the vox, effects, perfect for this.

are you using edirol? my only critique would be on the violins... I think the vibrato is exaggerated just a little too much.. though.. I don't know if that's fixable or not. whatever... not a big deal...

very nice.

He he he

Quite a change with all the other stuff.
Do you have a little brother/sister? or kids?  They must enjoy.

Nicely done...

Very nice, and different! Soothing! The guitar is a little tinny or too high in mix maybe, but overall really nice. Like the floydy lyrics too!!!

Love lullaby"s
Perhaps you know Grandaddy??
One of the thirst albums of grandaddy are almost totally lullaby's.
So genius.
Positive critic would be: try to make a  more like song cause this is (what i think)only a intro.
But as a lullaby i have rated it accordingly.
Good luck to you.
Volt.

would the full instrumentation keep the little guys awake?  i like lullaby's.  this is nice.

well the music is good..
but your vocals are not clear in a headphone..
so work on it

what?

good

Well, don't you get it? it's not clear in the headphone... selfexplanatory really