Right, this is the final song in the '80s Cheesemeister series. I'll post something COMPLETELY different next time. Just wanted to get these tracks off my chest once and for all.
Sorry.

im generally not at all intrested in stuff like this but hey even I have to say I like it keep up the good work

This is what I grew up with, so yes it works! They "don't" see might be easier to sing than "can't see."

Reminds me of a combo of Survivor and the Cars.

You took the time to get the right vocal harmonies, they're very strong and determined. That's something you don't see often. Nice recording, too.

I'm new, so feel free to come by and hear my songs, I put "Don't Pass Me by" (DPMB)up on the battle-the other stuff is experimental, and not fantastic, but I like the oddness of the TightSqueeze stuff-it was a duo...

I know you got skills. The mix is good, the singings good, the song is well put together.
The writing is good. The only thing I don't like is it seems almost bubble gum pop wich is not really my favourite type of music from the 80's.

Still it shows alot of skill and talent very pro.

nice nice,

sounds good to me, not something I'd buy, but it's enjoyable in certain situations, reminds me of some good parts of my time as a kid in the early to mid eighties.

quality and contruction is tops, overall feel nice to good, so good job. I'll leave a nice rating too

ok, no need to say things as pro and great again, its obvious, you are

but for taste i cant go along with you this time, although its a great piece (oh oh there i go again..)

i just cant dig this guitarsound (though it works very well in the lowest parts ('tell you right' 'make it right'', especially the first time )

it sounds just as a 'directly plugged in the table' guitar, no speakers in between, and with a distortion on it without ampmodeling, i dont like the high end of it, i know it is used a lot, it's just me, and i imagined how much i would enjoy this song more if it didn't sound this way, too bad for me you'd say

also the singing is too polite for this rockfeel to me

yet it is otherwise so perfect and complex as i never could, i mean Playing, Composing ánd Recording..

(oh oh, there i go again..)

No, you're right. I think I got too influenced by Trevor Horn in the 80s and never really got over it. listening to it with fresh ears I agree completely that it is too polite. This is what happens when you let a keyboard player loose with a guitar. Never again...

80s Cheesemeister is right...but everyone goes through phases.  Well played and sung, the harmonies are tight.  Can't wait to hear one of your more contemporary pieces...