Here it is then.. :P, the finished version, well we will remake it sometime but this is the finished demo.

songtext:

There is no one who can say
That he is without sins
Without lying to himself

Altough our hearts contain good will
We seem out of control
When will this madness finally stop

We all are humans, show humanity
We all need love in this society
We all need trust and reliability
So we can live in full prosperity

We all are sinners
We all are haters
We all are bullies
(whisper) Is it just in our blood?

We all are sinners
we all are haters
We all are bullies
(whisper) Were we created this way?

We make mistakes everyday
Most times we don't even know
We seem to find it quite allright

Is our conscience fading away?
Or are we just unprincipled?
We can't go on living this way

We all are humans, show humanity
We all need love in this society
We all need trust and reliability
So we can live in full prosperity

Killing between different etnicities
Underaged girls ripped of virginity
Religions showing much hostility
we all are acting quite dispicably

We all are sinners
We all are haters
We all are bullies
(whisper) Is it just in our blood?

We all are sinners
we all are haters
We all are bullies
(whisper) Were we created this way?

Very nice.... although the vocals seem still a bit weak...  too low in the mix...  but the song is rocking....  I like it....

         I like the keys... very minimalist, and tasteful...  great job
                                                         JimK

pretty cool song this has become. great guitar tones, nice solo.. nice overall soundscape.

Vocals are a bit.... I don't know... I'd like to hear some more clarity in there, something with a bit more bite... not this "easygoing nice guy" voice you got right now. and maybe a bit more to the front.

but all in all this is a pretty cool song. I like it!

i like the keyboard! it sounds very enthralling and mixes nicely with the sound. but for this song your voice needs to be more demonic and dirty. it's to clean for the beat. but other than that grate job!

i like the keyboard! it sounds very enthralling and mixes nicely with the sound. but for this song your voice needs to be more demonic and dirty. it's to clean for the beat. but other than that grate job!

i like the keyboard! it sounds very enthralling and mixes nicely with the sound. but for this song your voice needs to be more demonic and dirty. it's to clean for the beat. but other than that grate job!