Another version of a song I put on here before, which I accidently deleted.  Any crits are fabulous.

Intro sounds like Smells Like Teen Spirit. Pretty cool...

A very muted sound, which, to me, spoils the song somewhat. 
When the manic guitar starts it takes a while to get used to the very strange scale you're using (someone's bound to be able to say what the name of it is).
I think this could sound pretty good if some of the sounds were cleaned up a little.

haha... I downloaded the original! so I'm happy to hear this awesome remix!

those over-the-top guitars are great! very punk in a way...

but I must say I'm also glad to have the original... so this goes into my itunes special punk playlist too, as a remix of-

thanks

Eventually I'll get a final version of this song done.  I'm really just starting to get adjusted to this home recording stuff and I'm doing the best with what I have.  I feel the original is better, but what do you think xeno?  Also how could I improve it?