Lyrics are as usually not recorded yet ... Sorry ^^
But here it is

Hey Chandler,
was ist passiert? Die Aufnahme klingt wie durch eine Röhre. Ansonsten ist die Idee absolut geil. Mach weiter so. Das Ende ist ebenfalls grandios.

I really like the chord progression, a little Metalica influence? It has a nice feel to it, great guitar work. Hope to hear the vox soon.

too bad about the shabby recording quality - this sounds like a really interesting piece of work. I'd love to give this a better rating, but I won't because there's no vocals and the recording quality isn't ok. but the construction, and tightness of the parts - yeah! some great groovy sounds on the bass and guitars...

das mit den röhren kommt daher dass ich gerade dabei bin mich mit dem eq in wavelab auseinanderzusetzen ... dabei is der sound dann irgendwie ausversehen ein bisschen röhrig geworden xD

mh ... at the beginning I thought this song shows a little influence of alice in chains or nirvana ... but when I hear it now, it seems to be closer to metallica than to the others ... (=

the sound is bad, because I don´t have enough money for good recording equipment yet...
that damn on-board-soundcard sucks.

yay ... öhm, thank you for your ratings and comments

well, like PuppetXeno said, the tightness of the parts is impressive, you've obviously got great rythm...
just gonna repeat what was already said, recording quality, no vox...

aside from that, a very cool song... This song was very original!

I know what it means, so I can say that it suits it well, and also the lyrics, sounds professional to me, I don't know, it sounds so clear, in my opinion it doesn't need a voice, the music speak by itself.

interesting ideas. like the disonant guitars.

good guitar work!

post a song with someone doin vocals :P

-keep it up

i think the guitar speaks for itself here. Isn't that what music is about? In my opinion, vocals are absolutely not a necessity if you know what you're doing, which you certainly do!

i thought it was a good song. The guitar was cool... maybe the feedback at the beginning was a little too high, maybe not. But the song was good. It feels like remembering a good night out right after you get back home.

I love the progression - i love he riff, someone mentioned Metallica, but i would agree its a bit more Nirvanaalice n chains. What are you recording on to, the midi drums arn't bad ( some nice lines in thier by the way! ) but the overall low qual really makes it sound like its being played thru a pillow.
I would love to hear some vocals - please don't forget to post it againe when you have the song complete!
Dave