Acustic version of my song.

I recorded it before the original version. have some spelling mistakes cuz i didnt even have lyrics clear. maybe, generally vocals r better that in the other version...who knows!

vote if u like,pliz

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A funny noise at 2:36

good stuff.   shame the recording quality is so low.  also, the fact that the verse is based almost entirely on one chord makes it a little dull after a while.  keep working at it though - you've got some good melodic ideas.

I like the electric version much better.  More fun to listen to.